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i'm daunted. so i'll take a really deep breath and begin. all right. this is rant-y. but you rant well. you have to clean up your spelling, but i wouldn't ...

wow. i popped this in the translator and it was beautiful. then i stopped bothered my boyfriend (he speaks spanish well) and had him read it to me. all in ...

are all that life has offer are all that life has to offer Life has given me weaknesses, Life has given me strength, but I'll use all my weaknesses, to ...

But tomorrow, oh don't use the "oh". and listen to backgroundbob. =]

these are two...not so good poems that are rather short. so i'll save bulletin space. Cement and Lovers Rough – here comes the passion’s play. Breath – I’m gasping life ...

i enjoyed this, but for some odd reason i didn't like how you followed every part of his body. it would have been better if, perhaps, you made the body ...

personally, i like the original version of your poem better, and that version i absolutely loved . it didn't hold a very deep, sensual meaning, but for that i can't ...

right. read a lot or apply some spell and grammer checks. for example: friends they can be loving, caring, and nice but the other times they can backstab you talk ...

ok, your vocabulary is outstanding. now, to build on that, you did hold my attention. another important point of poetry - rhythm. you need it...and it's not really here. well, ...

Only you, I and God know what you'll be you forced yourself to list these and for some odd reason, even being the shortest line, it was crowded. strange ladies ...

don't force rhymes, increase your vocabulary and read some poetry. it's more about rhythm and meaning than anything else. so don't force something that won't come.

short and sweet. symbolic or not, the chocolate images sweetened my day.

wordy, but nonetheless beautiful. it's annoying how i have to sit here and piece it apart, but it was worth. my favorite lines: i wanna be a coffee coloured brown ...

i completely understand this and can relate to it. ah, what it what be but what past of myself i would be missing... this expressed it completely truthfully, and for ...

try again...just not on the...same subject. stop the repetition and research poetry - try at first by reading some...